Hey Vanasia, Great pitch! I like how you clearly stated the problem you identified and also brought up compelling points as to why this service is needed in the coaching industry. I liked your idea of making your online service a monthly subscription, that way you are getting straight profit from your hard work in creating these videos. I really like where you are going with this, and I can't wait to hear more about it!
I liked the pitch. You explained the problem really well and now I have seen some of the effects of bad communication by coaches. I am guessing that the pricing is based on the pricing of your former coach/teacher's business. I found the price made your pitch feel a lot more concrete.
Hey Vanasia,
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch! I like how you clearly stated the problem you identified and also brought up compelling points as to why this service is needed in the coaching industry. I liked your idea of making your online service a monthly subscription, that way you are getting straight profit from your hard work in creating these videos.
I really like where you are going with this, and I can't wait to hear more about it!
I liked the pitch. You explained the problem really well and now I have seen some of the effects of bad communication by coaches. I am guessing that the pricing is based on the pricing of your former coach/teacher's business. I found the price made your pitch feel a lot more concrete.
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